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For being a basement, it finally started to feel like home, Ryan thought to himself. He had spent the last two years of his life becoming an artist, while he was kept in the darkness in the bowels of his captor's house.

He wasn't alone. Lorena was about his age, sixteen, but she was still far from trying to make the best of the situation. Ryan didn't blame her.

There were a few positives to living like this and Ryan tried to take advantage with what he had. The basement he was kept in was much bigger than his old room and, more importantly, he was surrounded by all the art supplies he needed. He was currently painting the farthest wall from the stairs into a beautiful blue sky when Lorena returned with Uncle John. It was his best piece of work - his masterpiece.

The locks clicked one by one - there were a total of seven. One light lit the room - it hung, and it swayed. Ryan always became blinded when the door opened, but through that blinding light he could see Lorena's return. She was escorted in and brought to her cage. Uncle John kept all his captives in cages. He only trusted Ryan. Ryan was the only child that had more privileges.    

Ryan continued to paint as Uncle John made his way to the wall. "Wow . . . Ryan you have outdone yourself again," Uncle John said as he stared at the wall. "Did you need anymore supplies?" he asked.

"Sir, I am fine. Thank you," Ryan spoke sullenly to his captor.

"Well . . . good work," Uncle John said. Uncle John stared at it for at least a whole minute before he walked back up the steps and out the door. Seven clicks followed.

Lorena moved to her cot and wrapped herself in her blanket. She didn't know that she would probably be dead soon.
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Pieces, not chapters. Little delectable pieces for you to digest in the following months - every Sunday.

Next piece: [link]


"Mushrooms are feed shit and kept in the dark. Ryan was one of these mushrooms." -L. Vera excerpt from Mushrooms

So, I've been busy. I'm writing two novels and "The Horror Suicide Show" is being published by Trestle Press. So expect it to be on Amazon and Kindle in the following months.

Also check me out on twitter. @LVeraWrites [link]

Mention me, follow me, just don't molest me. :stinkeye:
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~Datas-Girl Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
I've just finished the whole thing... Wow. Very powerful. I love this.
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:iconlverawrites:
thanks. :D I've just started my newest serial fiction "The Monolith" [link]
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~Datas-Girl Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I'll have to check it out.
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:iconshyanne-kai:
This is fantastic. The atmosphere is tense and uneasy, yet I want to know more about their lives here.
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:iconlverawrites:
Thanks. saw all your comments. This is the first one i'm responding to. :)
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Mood: Love ~Link1245 Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:wow: amazing :heart:
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:iconlverawrites:
Thanks there are already four pieces out. They come out every Sunday.
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~Link1245 Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^ thankies ^^ reading xD still
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:iconlverawrites:
thanks. Check out my new free short story "Fallen Awake" exclusively on pixelhose.com . It qualified as a chance to win a contest, so I need your help. It is determined by facebook "likes, tweets, gmail "+1"s, wordpress "likes" and replies. So if you have multiple accounts please help me out. [link]
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Mood: Love !KayMFGoodlow Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Will be keeping up with this story!
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