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A video found on Angela's computer:

"Okay, Guys," Angela yelled. "Here's the guest of honor."

Todd stared into the mirror in front of him, watching the door.

The camera was brought to the floor as Angela climbed the the steps and, after a quick moment, returned.

The silhouette was not Angela's. The bound woman was very familiar to Todd.

"Say hello," Angela said. The camera caught the feet of the stranger. There were tight rope around her ankles and, as she was pushed hard over the stairs, she landed hard on the floor. The camera stayed locked on the back of her head.

Todd screamed, "Vanessa!"

Angela's Diary:

(continued)
It wasn't hard to decide who I wanted.


(continued)

"Do you finally see it Todd?"

Todd was speechless.

"It's over. Once Angela kills your old lady, you'll be dead."

The camera panned around Charles as he continued into the mirror, "I finally realized what happened. Our father killed the only anchor he had - mother. She was the only thing that kept him - sane. I really can't find a better word."

"No," Todd whispered.

"Angela would you go ahead and kill the girl," Charles said.
Please read book I first. [link]
or, if you already have, read the beginning of book II. [link]

Summary:
Sorry for the title, too many other choices wouldn't fit. IT was meant to be ". . . Apr 16 part 2" but it's too long.

Next: The first of a two part Finale. [link]
:stinkeye:

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spacezillazon Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
good job.oh boy not good
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:iconmermaidprincessmegan:
I don't know how I feel about this either...
I love the view and the story and the details we have got with Charles...
But I'll always love Todd...

looking forward to what's next and the finale... :stinkeye:

(and I don't know why, but, I don't like this Angela girl one bit...)
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Lunar786Night Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
NOOOO I liked TOD :iconsadnessplz:
It also reveals a bunch of mysteries...
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
Poor Todd. Think he'll make it through this ordeal?
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:iconlunar786night:
Lunar786Night Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
YES!!
I BELIEVE in him!!
:iconspiritplz:
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011
:)
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mendystar1 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
How did Angela find Vanessa?!?! I didn't see this!
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:iconlverawrites:
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
At her wedding, probably.
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mendystar1 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. They knew where she was having the wedding though?
I don't know if I should say creepy or excellent stalker skills.
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011
probably excellent stalker skills. :)
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mendystar1 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha. Can't wait to read this week's chapter!
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
What do you think for the cover for The Horror Suicide Show? [link]
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:iconmendystar1:
mendystar1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I saw it and I commented. It's really simple.
At first it kind of confused me, cause there was a hole in the guy's head but then I understood. haha!
It's really good!
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maryamkeys Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
Really an awesome job!
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:iconlverawrites:
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
thanks. I'm glad you enjoy it. It's hard working on serial pieces but it's worth it.
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KimoraAura Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
wow I feel sorry but i dont O.o
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:iconlverawrites:
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011
Poor Vanessa.
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:iconkimoraaura:
KimoraAura Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011
lol yea XD
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:iconlverawrites:
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
What do you think for the cover for The Horror Suicide Show? [link]
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:iconkimoraaura:
KimoraAura Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
it looks unique but then again everything you do is very unique and surprises me
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:iconlverawrites:
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
Hopefully in a good way. :)
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:iconkimoraaura:
KimoraAura Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
haha i wouldnt love it if it wasnt in a good way :heart:
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011
ha, thanks. I also just released a free ebook today. Please take the time to download it. :) [link]
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EmperorKarino Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
im not quite sure is going on in this one.
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011
I kinda cut this one short for dramatic effects. Spoiler: Originally I had Vanessa's fate sealed in this piece. But since she was just introduced back in the story I wanted her to last a little longer.
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EmperorKarino Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ok
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Ozimul Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm not sure whether to feel sorry for Todd or not.
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LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011
I feel sorry for Todd and Charles. :)
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