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A video found on Angela's laptop:

"There was once a man who grew to become two," Todd said as he was strapped to a chair. The camera picked up the audio, but there was no picture. "Death and rot, plagued their little head, forming a insatiable hunger," he continued. "Green, his world, was green and yet their life was full of darkness. God himself, refused the two any sanctuary. 'You have killed my daughter, who was the lamb of your innocence. Darkness shall be your punishment, but you will share this judgment. Like the two brothers who share one life, you will share your life outside while the other remained here.'"

A light had appeared illuminating the area around the Madman. He sat, tied to a chair with a thick rope. Angela entered through the door above the steps. Originally, the door hid within the shadow. The light tore through, beginning with a bright rectangle.

"You're a awake," her voice got louder as she approached. Her shoes clapped on the floor.

The camera lifted off the ground after a brief glimpse of Angela's shoe. They were white and even though it was a quick glance, there seemed to be a red spot on them.

"Say hi," she said as the Madman tried to turn his head. She began filming from her perspective. The Madman's back faced the door. "So who am I speaking to? The sensual Todd, or the kinky Charles," she said touching his shoulder lightly with her fingers.

"Angela," the Madman managed to say. His eyes seemed glazed as Angela crouched in front of him, putting his face into view. "Love, let me go." It was Charles. "What's going on?"

The camera swerved into the darkness as the room slowly became brighter. She brought the camera back on the madman. In front of him stood a large mirror. It was old and at the top right corner the mirror was broken. It was just enough to keep together, yet enough to hold two different angles.

The madman stared into the mirror. "Hi, Charles," Todd spoke into the mirror.

"Welcome to the end," Todd said. His voice was a little higher and his eyebrows were less emotional than Charles's.

"The end? You call this an ending? Angela, please. Show this bastard an ending," Charles said as his face wrinkled with his expressions.

Angela's Diary:

April 16th, 2011
Dear Diary,

Today I get to chose between two guys. I'm in love with both of them.

One is passionate and crazy, the other is sweet and remarkable. Todd's a legend. Charles is the real thing. I think I know who I want.

April 16, 2011
MrGreenEyes88: Today I die.
1 hour ago     - Reply - View Tweet -
Please read book I first. [link]
or, if you already have, read the beginning of book II. [link]

The struggle begins. Todd and Charles, once again feuding back and forth. Who will win? Whose side is Angela on?

Next: Angela shows her allegiance. [link]

Also check out my newest short story "An Online Devil" [link]
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Bandia13 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I must ask, How can Tod/Charles Tweet if he's tied up?
Just out of curiosity?
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
It's from before. but i guess i didn't make that clear. :)
Bandia13 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that's ok =D
spacezillazon Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
good job.and this is a different take I think for the story

I love the duality of the mirror and the symbolic nature of it in this scene.
Once again I would love to view this struggle.
RyanTaylorGirl Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I can't wait for more!!!
Lunar786Night Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I'm Team Tod.
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011
Me too. I actually plan on having a poll soon. Stay tuned. :)
Ozimul Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student General Artist
The suspense hurts...!
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
Thanks. I hope you'll enjoy the ending, let's see how much i can string this out. :)
mendystar1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Angela's the one who's gonna choose? Oh god. I have no idea who she's gonna pick. Maybe Todd.
Maybe she's kill both of them. That would be weird. Can't wait for the next chapter!
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
I like the way you think. :shh:
mendystar1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thedarklady12 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
LVeraWrites Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
thanks. :)
thedarklady12 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
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