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August 17th
(Continued...)


Diary, I am writing from my childhood bedroom. I found the letter. I found all of them. How can she be dead and still be able to send me all these letters?

She's alive and I need to find her. I plan on heading back to my apartment tomorrow morning to pack up and get a flight ready.

I called Vanessa from my house phone. Vanessa was happy to hear from me and I was also happy to hear her voice. I felt so nervous to even call her. I felt my stomach get queasy before I even dialed her number. I'm glad I did.  The sound of her voice made me forget about everything. We talked for about an hour and she asked me to meet her friends. Our relationship is growing pretty fast. I'm not sure how I can juggle two relationships. I have one with a loving angel and the other with a murderous hunger.

The hunger swims in circles in the back of my stomach. It's like a hungry shark contained in a huge fish tank swimming constantly in circles.


August 18th

Dear Diary,

The old lady down the hall has green eyes.

Green eyes.

Green.

The hunger.

It feeds off of green eyes.


August 19th


Dear Diary,

I don't know what got into me yesterday. I can barely read what I wrote yesterday. I felt terrified the whole afternoon. Now I finally have a grip on things.

I need to tell you what happened. I got home and I placed my stuff down on the table. Then everything toppled onto the floor and that's when I noticed it. The notes and letters that lay on the floor has the same hand writing. I felt so scared my body trembled. I made some tea and tried to calm down.

I felt horrible. I felt like my world was ending because I knew that there was more to all this. I reached into my bag and found an old book of mine I brought from home. It was James Thurber's 13 Clocks. I opened it up and in the margin where I wrote my name when I was thirteen, was the same writing as the notes and letters. I walked down the stairs in a mindless stupor to check my mail. Nothing, it was empty. I walked back upstairs and I saw the old lady. Her eyes are green.

I must kill her next.

The hunger burns like acid. I think I'm going to be sick.
:iconlverawrites:
The finale will be on Oct. 31 Halloween.

Please read July 30th first. [link]

The next pieces are listed here:
Aug 20th [link]
Aug 21st [link]
Aug 21st continued [link]
Finale: [link]

I suggest you fav this this to act as a bookmark in case you lose your place later.

Clue 6:
Left 4 dog
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:iconfreespiritkrr:
Clue 6: Make me think "Left 4 Dead" Awesome game.

So, the younger 'original' version, Todd, seems to want to get the Madman caught so he could have represented justice - but he killed Sarah. And the Madman can't be 'justice' because he is perfectly okay with the hunger that kills green-eyed women. But then you say the hunger's burning is making him sick. Maybe the Madman's not okay with the hunger? You need to make that more apparent if so.

You could have the writing cut off at the end, as if the Madman actually ran off to throw up as he was writing: "I think I'm going to be sick-
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:iconlverawrites:
the clues were teasers for an ebook i put out before diary of a Madman finished. The story was about a dog and cat killing zombies. The preview is in my gallery. The actual ebook has been tken down. I've been working on maintence on my ebooks. I plan on re-releasing them when the Diary of a Madman book comes out.

I love the comments.
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:iconfreespiritkrr:
Cool, and thanks =)
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:iconraineve:
*Raineve Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Poor old lady doesnt know whats coming!
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:icontaizel-41:
The end is near.... Nice connections there. Can't wait to see the rest.


Btw, my review should be in your email. If not tell me.
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:iconlverawrites:
I just sent one back. thanks for all the help. I plan on listing all the people who help in my book. I hope I can get it out by later this year.
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:icontaizel-41:
Okay, no problem at all. That's great. And good luck on that.
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:iconstingray93:
And I've read them all! And I think they're great. You're an awesome writer. =D

I can't wait to read the next installment so hurry! :sprint:
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:iconlverawrites:
Stay tuned for tonight's piece.
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:iconsjade15:
Thank God, I have been waiting for this! I like this one as well, green uhg feel bad for that lady shes going to get it haha! keep um comeing!

I cant wait for Haloween! im going to have to get on to check!
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